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Published by Ricardo and Isabel Nirenberg since 1998
Once in Ur I met a girl who sold
      kumquats from a basket strapped
      to her mule—oh, it was a frightful season
      then, no rain for months, her lips
      were cracked, we all swatted away
      the flies and blowing sand and
      children danced for a storm.
      I, a merchant, in Ur for the business
      and perhaps on a secret diplomatic
      mission for my king in Phrygia,
      I was used to the wenches and 
      had my share, though weary now
      of constant disarray.  But
      I fell in love with the girl in Ur—
      how bright her avocado eyes,
      how wheaty the amber hair the tips
      of which draped and lightly touched
      her slender shoulders.
      You doubt love at first sight
      and pass it off as lust?  Well,
      think what you may—but this I know:
      the girl from Ur smiled at me
      and lured me in and thereupon
      we eloped in all of Asia Minor.
I see your cup is empty, my friend,
      so allow me to pour you more of this
      legendary Abyssinian fig and date wine,
      a favorite of Xerxes the Great.
      When you love a woman—and I know
      you say you love Naxinia, or think you do—
      when you love a woman you want her
      to want to bear your child; you want
      to get her with child;  because it’s
      the closest you can ever conjoin with her,
      when two become one, then three.
      You and Naxinia remain barren, true?
      So let this be my testament thereupon:
      Eros looks backward from the future,
      incarnates past ecstasy in such fruit.
don’t lead to Rome no more
  they lead to my pastry shack
  in Pascagoula
  where me and Dolly, my cookie,
  blend our batter
don’t come for your bonbons,
  jelly rolls, brioche, apple pies
  right when we’re baking
  we’ll set our gators on you
  and maybe the hyena
but, ah, when the yeast rises
  and the oven’s blazing
  you can smell sweet dough
  ah throughout Mississippi
so take heed and order
  more hot cross buns
  at Easter when Dolly
  naked under that sackcloth
  sprinkles ashes in the sugar
some days the floater
  in my left eyeball
  scurries across
  the mise en scene
  like a tiny, frenzied
  scorpion
  sometimes it’s 
  a graceful bird
  swooping left to right
  and sometimes
  a black hole,
  a singularity
I know it’s merely
  myopic pressure,
  a bit of retina
  detaching,
  a grace note
  before the curtain
  draws to the
  drone of a bassoon
it once worried me
  now I worry it
Author Louis Gallo’s work has appeared or will shortly appear in Southern Literary Review, Fiction Fix, Glimmer Train, Hollins Critic,, Rattle, Southern Quarterly, Litro, New Orleans Review, Xavier Review, Glass: A Journal of Poetry, Missouri Review, Mississippi Review, Texas Review, Baltimore Review, Pennsylvania Literary Journal, The Ledge, storySouth, Houston Literary Review, Tampa Review, Raving Dove, The Journal (Ohio), Greensboro Review,and many others. Chapbooks include The Truth Change, The Abomination of Fascination, Status Updates and The Ten Most Important Questions. He is the founding editor of the now defunct journals, The Barataria Review and Books: A New Orleans Review. He teaches at Radford University in Radford, Virginia.